Tuesday, February 26, 2013

Semi-Colons

Use a semi-colon to separate items in a series, when each item contains within it a comma.  FOR EXAMPLE:

The Super Bowl has been held in a number of cities: Atlanta, Georgia; New Orleans, Lousiana; San Francisco, California; New York City, New York. 

TO AVOID A COMMA SPLICE, use a semi-colon to separate two sentences that have been joined. 

COMMA SPLICE:
Social networks provided hours of entertainment for many people,  it also provides an opportunity for predators to seek unsuspecting, innocent victims.

CORRECTION FOR COMMA SPLICE USING A SEMI-COLON:

Social networks provided hours of entertainment for many people;  it also provides an opportunity for predators to seek unsuspecting, innocent victims

Better REVISION:

 Social networks provided hours of entertainment for many people. Unfortuneately, social networks also provides an opportunity for predators to seek unsuspecting, innocent victims

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